Sunday, April 11, 2010

Oh, I've been in a way

i've been in a way these past few days,
and since i've not much to say,
i'll continue on my way, in way, of continuing to sway,
for swaying is my way, today, delay, then sway,
though it's not much of a way, i'd say,
so avoid my swaying way,
but if you say, hey, to sway i may,
then sway, and sway away,
but when in the star's bay the moon does lay,
and your day is swayed away,
you will bay your foray of the sway,
and cease your swaying ways

4 comments:

  1. i can't really tell if it's heavy-handed or brilliant.

    *squints, looks around*

    regardless the theme is perfect.

    "for swaying is my way, today, delay, then sway"

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  2. first read through, it felt contrived.


    but then ...

    ... it started to grow on me ...

    ... and grow ...

    ... and you can't help but kind of sway along while reading.

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  3. lol I am still loving Conrad's comment.

    *squints, looks around*

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